Saturday, February 25, 2012

Nelia and Marie


One time, in the far, far away, lived a young lady named Nelia. She lived in a small village named Blue Sky Village. She also had two best frieds, Lim and Soni. But, in the Blue Sky Village, there was a girl who hated Nelia and her name was Marie. Marie came from a rich family. She hated Nelia because she thought that Nelia was too poor to be her friend.
            One day, there was a man moved in there. He was so handsome and rich and many girls there fell in love with him including Nelia and Marie. He lived next door to Marie. Of course, Marie felt so proud, she tried to get the man’s attention. Unfortunately, the man was not interested in her. So Marie started to think that the man hated her.
            A week later, when the man walked around the village, he saw a young lady, Nelia and her best friends. He came closer to Nelia and asked her, “ Hey young lady, may I know your name?” – “ Ohh….I’m Nelia and what’s your name?” – “ You can call me Drew” – “ Drew? Oh… Okay…umm…see you,” Nalia said and ran leaving him. She was so nervous and almost speechless. But, without she knew it, Drew followed her and her best friends until they went home.
            The next day, first in the morning, Drew came to Nelia’s house and knocked at the door. “ Oh, sir…why are you here?” said Nelia surprised. “ Hey, don’t call me sir. Call me Drew. Okay, I just wanna tell you that tonight, I will hold a party at my home. I couldn’t be happier if you can make it to the party” – “ Owh…sure. My pleasure.” – “ Okay, see you tonight,” he went leaving Nelia. Quickly, Nelia went to her friend’s house, Lim and told her about what Drew had said. “ Really?”said Lim. She did not believe it. “ Yes…Oh, I feel so excited” – “ Okay, now, follow me.” Lim invited Nelia to Soni’s house. Then, she whispered to Soni, “ show her now.” – “ Okay, Nelia, follow me,” said Soni. He went to a strange room. There, he showed Nelia a beautiful gown. “ This is for you,” he said. “ Really?!” – “ Yes. Wear this to the party” – “ Oh…thanks. You really my best friends,” Nelia said hugging them. On the other hand, someone told Marie that Nelia would go to Drew’s party. She got mad. She asked a witch, Selly to help her so Nelia could not come to the party. After that, Selly kidnapped Nelia and brought her to a secret tall tower. No one knew where Nelia was except her best friends. So, they tried themselves to help Nelia. Soni went to the tower and Lim went to the party to tell Drew about Nelia and the witch. But, Drew did not believe it. He said that there was no witch there. Lim kept on trying to convince him but, Drew still could not believe. Finally, Lim gave up. She went to the tower to see Soni. Marie looked so glad to see it, she smiled and went out from the party room. She called Selly and told her, “ if one of us knows that Nelia can be saved, you must attack the party room.”
            On the way, Lim met her grandpa. She told about Nelia and the witch. Then, her grandpa gave her some beans. “ These beans will grow quickly after you water it once. These are magic beans,” he said. “ Okay thanks, Grandpa.” So, Lim went as fast as she could to the tower and then, she planted the beans and watered them. “ How some beans can help us?” asked Soni. “ These are some magic beans.” After she watered them, the beans grew very fast as tall as the tower. Then, Soni climbed up the beans stalk and saved Nelia. Unfortunately, Selly knew that Nelia had been saved. So, she told Marie and started to attack the party room. “ Hyah….” The first attack had been launched. Every body went out from the party room. “ Who did it?” asked Drew. “ I,” said Marie. “ You why?” – “ You said that you hate me. So, I must hate you too, right?!” – “ But…” – “ Stay there!” Then, the witch attacked Drew. He fell down to the ground. “ Stoop!!!!” all of sudden, Nelia came. “ You are such a bad lady, Marie” – “ What if I am, do you want to make problems with me?” - “ I just…” – “ I just bla…bla…bla,” snapped Marie “ you…” – “ Silent you! Selly…” Selly prepared to attack Nelia. On the other hand, Drew wanted to help Nelia. He took a mirror beside him and stood infront of Nelia. “ Piefff..” The black magic did not hit Nelia. Instead, it hit Marie. Marie’s beautiful gown changed into a black bad gown. Feeling shy, she went home quickly and she never looked walking around the village. A month later, Marie and Selly moved out from Blue Sky village and they never came back there again. In the end, Drew, Nelia and her friends lived happily ever after.


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